draft personal article in german for nachdenkseiten.org

[Thomas Koch]

I want to write a personal article for the German news website
nachdenkseiten.org - They asked for expert recommendations regarding the
Windows 10 privacy disaster.

Would somebody want to help me and review it?
https://gist.github.com/thkoch2001/d1bb1946804004d3f1d9

If you like, you can also make it an official article of the debian project and 
I withdraw mine. But I think it would be good to send it this week.

Thank you,

Thomas Koch

CC to FSFE, if somebody has an time for a review.