On Sat, 2012-03-24 at 17:35 +0100, William from Texas wrote:
I made some edits, mostly on the final paragraph where we say it's an alternative to proprietary offerings. Maybe someone should also have a look at that paragraph as it's the take-away message.
Thanks William, yes it definitely reads better after your changes. I made a few alterations to the last paragraph in order to shorten it, as this will be a press release, and the shorter the better.
Thanks very much for your help!
Sam.