Hi Björn,

Thanks for your suggestion, you are right, I tried to emphasise the business benefit for SMEs with "profit". No issue changing it to "benefit" from my side, as long as no one else likes something else.

Kind regards,
Sivan

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On Jun 18 2018, at 11:10 am, Bjorn Lundell <bjorn.lundell@his.se> wrote:

Hi Sivan and all,

We find that it looks very good.

However, we have one minor comment concerning the text. Instead using
"profit" in the first sentence:

"FOSS4SMEs will develop an ECVET training course on how SMEs can profit
from using Free and Open Source Software (FOSS). ..."

...we instead suggest:

"FOSS4SMEs will develop an ECVET training course on how SMEs can benefit
from using Free and Open Source Software (FOSS). ..."


By using "profit", there is a risk that people think of 'cost-saving'
which (more than 10 years ago) used to be a driver for FOSS. Today, it
is much more diverse and we would prefer to amplifying "profit" (i.e.
short term financial benefits) in a short overview.

Kind regards,
--Björn

On 2018-06-18 10:45, Sivan Pätsch wrote:
Hi Katerina,

I'm glad to hear you and Ifigeneias comments. We now finalised proposal F (attached) for our event, as I said on the call, we needed remarks by Friday COB. We also shortened the text a bit to make it fit onto the flyer.
As you prefer proposal E, I think we can provide a final version of that (with your contact details), so that you can use that proposal still. If you'd like to change the picture, we are also happy to produce a version with a new picture if you send us one that you like.
Looking forward to hear from you.
Kind regards,
Sivan

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On Jun 18 2018, at 10:27 am, Katerina Tsinari<tsinari@abe.gr> wrote:

Dear Sivan,

thank you for your new proposals for our Project brochure. The comments of Ifigeneia and me are:
- we would prefer not to have the back sides of people (proposal C and D), but their happy faces instead.
- we would avoid so bright colours like in proposal F.
- We like proposal E, because the people seem like IT experts. We would prefer to have also an IT girl in the picture, respecting the gender issue, if its possible. But its no big deal, we can leave it also like that.


We are looking forward to your final edition. Thank you in advance.

Best,
Katerina


On 15 June 2018 at 13:14, Sivan Pätsch<sivan@openforumeurope.org (mailto:sivan@openforumeurope.org)> wrote:
Hi all,

The proposals for review now.
Kind regards,
Sivan

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