I agree with you. As a non-native speaker it's really difficult to read the text. I thought from the standpoint of translating this text but I am not able to do this.
I will re-read it later maybe reading it twice make something more clear.
Regards, Thomas
On July 18, 2016 11:21:16 AM GMT+02:00, Theo Schmidt sus2006@bluewin.ch wrote:
I think the first paragraphs need to be rewritten in more easily understandable sentences and also include the point of the article. As it is, the point does not come until later and the whole article, although correct, is difficult to read even for knowlegeable native English speakers, and probably *very* difficult for others.
Having said that, it is very difficult and I could not do it myself at all.
Best, Theo