I completely agree with Robert:
There is way to much content and not enough empty space to comfortably read. As well I would use much less different font sizes and styles. Especially I would get rid of small narrow fonts. Everything should fit in a clear scheme present on all pages of the leaflet.
It will be great to have such a flyer in the future. :)
Best Franz
On Wed, 2014-07-23 at 10:57 +0200, Robert Martinez wrote:
All in all I think there is way too much text on those pages. You tackle Free Software + background, FSFE + promotion, the EmailSelfDefense campaign, how Encryption and Free Software go hand in hand, promote the GnuPG software - *AND* you explain public key encryption all on the same flyer! My suggestion are: _Remove what you don't absolutely need and shorten the texts to mere links to the respective websites that can do the _actual_ explaining. _don't scatter the GPG explanation over different pages
There is to few information to explain the complete logic behind GPG, but it is also too much for "just the basics". My suggestion: _explain more general and just keep linking to the campagin
The huge illustrations need more context, especially if they are on different pages. My suggestion: label them something like "The bad current situation" & "What we can do about it"
My impression is that the also looks would benefit from less text, but mainly from harmonising style elements: just keep using the exact same colors and fontsizes/fontstyles and feeling as the original material.