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Hi Erik,
Your draft looks appealing. I'm looking forward for a printed version. A few remarks:
please make sure "E-Mail" is not hyphenated. A lonely "E-" at the end of a line looks awkward.
There are – like this – a few sentences with insertions. Make sure the en-dash is connected to the insertion and does not stand alone in the next or previous line. Like in page 4 (outside left): … vier Freiheiten – benutzen, studieren, teilen und verbessern – beruht.
Also justifcation tends to look ugly. Please make sure the hyphenation works. Else it produces ugly huge spaces between words in short lines.
There is a huge difference in the underlines of "Öffentlicher Schlüssel" and "Privater Schlüssel" at page 2 (inside left).
I suspect you're going to fix the rounded corners of the boxes?
On page 3 (inside right) the width of the three columns are different. Might be better when they are equally wide.
Regards,
Phil