On 26/08/13 23:52, Chris Hayes wrote:
Please can anyone offer feedback as to which logo/design/form they'd like to see finished, I'll have some time to work on this tomorrow night; so feedback before then would be appreciated, cheers.
I like it, too. It's a different, more blunt approach to stick a warning label onto stuff!
Here is what came to my mind:
* the handwritten url adds to the style and fits well, but it could use some more readability (especially the "THE"in "THEY" and the "TY" in "WANTYOU"). I guess a slightly less artistic, yet individual hand drawn url works better.
* spacing issue: white text has too much space at the bottom
* I prefer the circle version, it feels more official an transports the bureaucratic aspect of: "Dude, due to §1421 we have to warn you, although we don't want to."
hope it helps, robert