Hi Max,
On 22/07/14 19:00, Max Mehl wrote:
First of all I suggest mentioning the Windows pendant "Gpg4win" in the flyer. Many people search for GnuPG for their Windows computers but only find cryptic source code (forgive me, coders ;) ) or this software. Because we teach them to be kind of paranoid, they could hesitate downloading Ggp4win because they have no trust in a differently named program.
thanks, you have a point in that. You have any idea where exactly we shall mention it? And what about mac? Then we should mention GPGtools, too. What about Enigmail, shall we mention that? Then maybe it makes sense to have an extra box for it? Or is it ok, because all these programs and how to install them is written @ https://emailselfdefense.fsf.org/de and we have this link for people who want to know more?
Any opinions here?
# Erik Albers [22.07.2014 @ 18:37]:
I would like to ask you for your feedback about
TEXT: Every German speaker is encouraged to proofread the text, give feedback or improve it. For easy collaboration, I made an etherpad about the text: https://public.pad.fsfe.org/p/emailselfdefense-flyertext Please proofread or give comments. I wrote half a page myself and I have rewritten parts of the FSF
I finished my proofreading and fixed some small bugs and also deleted some unnecessary words.
I noticed that you only used the informal "du"/"dein" instead of "Du"/"Dein" like it should be written in personal letters. Is this intended? If so, please fix these words in the standard "about FSFE" part as it is written differently there.
Thanks for the hint. The text that is used in the flyer is deriving about 70 percent from the original flyer by the FSF. And they have been using "Du". While the text "about FSFE" is based on our own text and we usually use "Sie". I am going to fix that. [1]
Beste Grüße, Erik
[1] despite the fact I like "Du" more because it sounds more direct and motivating.